It was Friday night .all the cakes were ready for the big man robot macaroni.
my sister was starving for that. she ate them all at last I went to sleep
starving for food .next morning the man came and it slapped my sister , then
suddenly a man faced like a mouse slapped him then macaroni fell on the bouncy bed and hit
the fan and started to rotate with it. My nostrils were red.
Then the mouse man ran to the clouds and fell down on the ground then I realized
that the mouse man was actually me!
Very good Aahil! You have written quite clearly. I like the use of 'bouncy, 'nostrils' and 'faced'. I'm impressed! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you very much mam:)
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