Tuesday, May 8, 2012

My weirdest dream

It was Friday night .all the cakes were ready for the big man robot macaroni. my sister was starving for that. she ate them all at last I went to sleep starving for food .next morning the man came and it slapped my sister , then suddenly a man faced like a mouse slapped him  then macaroni fell on the bouncy bed and hit the fan and started to rotate with it. My nostrils were red.

Then the mouse man ran to the clouds and fell down on the ground then I realized that the mouse man was actually me!


  1. Very good Aahil! You have written quite clearly. I like the use of 'bouncy, 'nostrils' and 'faced'. I'm impressed! :)